翻译公司分享翻译的技巧：汉译英中的“八不”！(2)
五、不结构单调，组合生硬拉郎配 由于汉英结构不同，表达方式迥异，硬性翻译不仅读起来别扭，而且会闹出笑话。这就要求译者在翻译时灵活使用整合
五、不结构单调，组合生硬“拉郎配”
由于汉英结构不同，表达方式迥异，硬性翻译不仅读起来别扭，而且会闹出笑话。这就要求译者在翻译时灵活使用整合的技巧，将句子整合，凸显汉语中所隐含的层次，补充所缺失的成分。有时要将简单句译成并列句，有时将并列句译成主从句。
在纪念大学毕业20周年聚会时，我忽然问起原来的班主任：“我个子又不矮，怎么把我安排在了第一排呢？”
At the reunion party for 20 anniversary of graduation from university, I suddenly asked my former teacher in charge of our class then:” Since I am not of short stature, how did you arrange me at the first row?”
一个高度近视的女博士去擦鞋店擦高统靴，秃头老板亲自蹲下来给她效劳。
When a woman doctor who suffers a severe myopic went to shoes-polishing shop for her buskins，the bald boss squatted down to serve her personally。
六、不“愚忠”，不谙增减之道
我们耳熟能详的东西外国人可能会感到一头雾水，译者需要增加必要的说明和补充或者减译。否则，外国人会不知所云。毕竟，汉译英最终是给外国人看的。
例如：风水
fengshui——the location of a house or tomb, supposed to have an influence on the fortune of a family。
七、不语句重复
汉语多重复，以强化语气；英语则要尽量避免重复。
王曰：“此鸟不飞则已，一飞冲天；不鸣则已，一鸣惊人。”
“The bird may not have flown yet”， replied the King, “Once it does, it will soar to the sky. I may not have cried out yet, but once it does, it will startle everyone。”(杨宪益译《史记-滑稽列传》)中国人也好，外国人也好，死人也好，活人也好，对的就是对的，不对的就是不对的。
What is right is right and what is wrong is wrong, no matter what it concerns, the Chinese or foreigners, the dead or the living。
八、不另起炉灶，走失精气神
译文要力求其“信”，尽可能契合汉语原来句子的气势、情绪和结构。例如，元朝人王实甫写下了《西厢记》，张雪静改编后并作了翻译：
掏出张生那封信，回头环视见梳妆台上的梳妆盒，眼睛一转，心里说有了，将信放了进去，合上盖时故意压了一角露在外面。
Rose took out Zhang's letter, she thought, “It would be better to put it in her make-up case, and letter find it herself。” So she put the letter in the case, leaving a corner of it sticking out, so that it would be quickly noticed。
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